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MrJonesSoda, June 23rd, 2008, 11:39 pm


Hurrah!
Here's page 5 in all of it's inked, non-toned glory.

Ooo! Valchrist's first appearence!

*toned by taylursmeeth




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rollcaskett2, June 23rd, 2008, 11:52 pm


WHOA
she looks like
majorly shocked in that last panel XDD


video_gamegurl, June 24th, 2008, 12:05 am


It's sweet


sammy_2008, June 24th, 2008, 12:22 am


sweet..


DarkMimi, June 24th, 2008, 1:23 am


No! Don't bite the girl when there's tender boy meat around!


silverbrumby123, June 24th, 2008, 4:03 am


nice lineart~

I would like to point out that you spelt opportunity wrong though ^_^

<3<3


Xweetke, June 24th, 2008, 5:32 am


Waaah! Hide hide hide!! Save yer self biatch xD
Foolish girl... Foolish boy they don't know what they're up against... teh almight Valchrist!


lurker, June 24th, 2008, 8:50 am


Wow! Absolutely love your style. Looking forward to reading the next page!
*Faves*


Striped Orange Socks, June 24th, 2008, 9:35 am


I love the new banner at the top <3 <3

And now, we wait.


Ninja.Of.The.Ink, June 24th, 2008, 9:54 am


MAN your art is awesome! I love all your comics and EVERYTHANG! Make more pages!! W00t!


ticky, June 24th, 2008, 10:20 am


loool geez, you and your cheesy japanese sound effects, comin' out of nowhere in americaland.

i looove how you draw girls, they are always so pretty ;ww;


MrJonesSoda, June 24th, 2008, 11:39 am

@ticky
haha, I thought japanese sound effects would be cooler. xDD But then again it would've made more sense if it read the other way.... ah well. Japanese don't ONLY read right-to-left. :P

thankyou~ I think I'm getting better at girls~


frozen_shamrocks, June 24th, 2008, 12:12 pm


Niiiice page.
But you spelled opportunity incorrectly.
I don't mean to be mean.
I just wanted to let you know.


MrJonesSoda, June 24th, 2008, 12:21 pm

@frozen_shamrocks
I know I did, but I'll wait to fix it once the toned version is done since I already sent my toner this page... >.>;;


Salome, June 24th, 2008, 1:34 pm


-in seat bouncing-
Attack, Valchrist, ATTAAAACK!!!!
-falls out of seat-


ninjies, June 24th, 2008, 3:04 pm


the only thing about the japanese sound effects is that I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT THEY SAY. i'm guessing the last panel is something like "shock!" and the second to last panel is something like "hmmm...i'm sitting here looking all cute and contemplative but chris doesn't even notice me. WHAT IS THIS CONUNDRUM?"
megan's so pretty * *


MrJonesSoda, June 24th, 2008, 4:04 pm

@ninjies
haha xD
The second-to-last panel just says "kuriii" like a creak or something.
And the last panel says "SUWAKU!" like "THWACK!" ...I've used "thwack" for every version of VV when Valchrist enters... >.>;;

haha, thanks :'D


Zanui, June 24th, 2008, 5:48 pm

Well, actually...
Valchrist made his first appearance a couple of pages ago. x3


fgirlmaggie, June 24th, 2008, 8:15 pm


Nonono Valchrist. Go get the boy. THE BOY. Y'know, the cuter one? :DDD (But alas, the girl is ALSO cute. Edpecially in the second to last panel. ;w;)

Lol the last panel is like "ZOMGAWD"


Gracie-May, June 25th, 2008, 3:51 pm

uuu!
Valchrist is such a lovelyy. :]


PACHIbamu, June 25th, 2008, 10:49 pm


.. i don't get why there's japanese sound effects.


MrJonesSoda, June 25th, 2008, 11:12 pm

@PACHI
cause it makes me feel happier inside. And it makes me feel like it's an actual manga, since all cool, published manga are japanese. OTL


xkrazydog, June 26th, 2008, 11:21 am


@MrJonesSoda: *twitch* ... i SINCERELY hope you're joking when you say that. Like... seriously.


MrJonesSoda, June 26th, 2008, 12:31 pm

@xkrazydog
actually, I did mean it. xDD
I could from now on make the sound effects in english if it bugs people THAT much. Sheesh, it's just a webcomic.

and... do you not like me or something? ;A; everything you say on my comics is always negative...


ninjies, June 26th, 2008, 12:37 pm


if you want to keep your japanese sound effects, that's fine. i mean, it's your webcomic and all and they don't bother me, but i think it would be in your best interest to write them in english since 99% of your readers are fluent english speakers and it'll help them understand what's going on better C:


xkrazydog, June 26th, 2008, 1:57 pm


@Soda: Negative? Aside from this comment, all the others were just blunt rather than negative. My apologies, I tend to do that alot. I would give positive feedback, but everything has already been stated by your other fans. And I'm just overtly critical when reading BL comics.
As for the japanese text: I agree with Ninjies. It would be in your best interest for it to be in english.

It just rather annoyed me when you said the only cool published manga are japanese, when thats inaccurate. There are a great number of manga influenced comics and manhwas that are great and NOT illustrated by mangakas in japan. You should really try out "Nightmares and Fairy Tales" that's illustrated by FSC and published by Slave Labor graphics, or manhwas like Priest.

To put sound effects in japanese when you aren't japanese and when your selected audience can't read it either seems rather awkward. Sound effects also set the mood so putting it in a language we cant read kinda kills it. But to each her own.
I'm sorry for my rudeness.


Xweetke, June 26th, 2008, 2:59 pm


@ Ninjies
That ain't fully correct...
I type and read fully english XD But I'm not really a speaker :P
Aah just fooling around...
Anyway I'm not English.. :P
Just to show you that 99% ain't correct... but who cares? XD

But I do have to admit with Xkrazydog
It's better to use only english in your comic, because most of us don't know what you mean and you might not do it to :P


ninjies, June 26th, 2008, 3:17 pm


@ xweetke:
then you're in the 1%.
obviously.


MrJonesSoda, June 26th, 2008, 4:00 pm

@xkrazydog
oh, I didn't mean that part. I meant the part that it made me feel happy inside and it made me feel like it's a real manga. xDD (maybe I should've left the other part out?) I didn't mean it like that xDD
I really do like korean and english manga though!

It's fine, I think from now on I'll have english sound effects.


CatGirlPrime, June 28th, 2008, 5:39 pm


Where are you finding sound effects in Japanese? I can find the phonetic spelling, but not the hiragana or katanaka. :/

I love Valchrist's ears...they're just so cute >w<

=^..^=~


AJAngelique, June 28th, 2008, 6:59 pm


oh noes!


MrJonesSoda, June 29th, 2008, 11:16 am

@CatGirlPrime
I've been typing them myself. xDD

thankyou!


redkisses, July 1st, 2008, 1:45 pm


and the DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM starts... NOW!

dundundunnnn


Incendiary Fluff, July 3rd, 2008, 4:28 pm


Re-drawwww~

I like the new header especially. <3 Everything's all shiny and improved~


Basilicum, July 6th, 2008, 5:08 am


BLamp32ojroiq. D:

I read VV when you had it up on devART, but JEEZ. THIS LOOKS FREAKING AWESOME.

DAMN.

Fantastic re-working~ Chris and Megan not so makey-outy in this version? :P

Fav'd~


Jake (Guest), July 7th, 2008, 10:12 am

O:
I spot a spelling mistake <.<
Probably already been spotted but what th heck.
Oppritunity= Opportunity


talkingsmack, August 8th, 2008, 12:04 pm


....Third panel.
Utterly gah-juss.


MarzipanPerfection, May 13th, 2009, 3:28 pm


Muhahahahaaa!!!!


constant_boredom, January 6th, 2010, 6:16 pm


I always love how the bad guys talk to themselves ^_^


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